Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, capitalized on her keen observation and love of the natural world.
(A)Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives,
(B)In her book illustrations, carefully coordinating them with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(C)In her book illustrations, which she carefully coordinated with her narratives, Beatrix Potter
(D)Carefully coordinated with her narratives, BeatrixPotter, in her book illustrations
(E)Beatrix Potter, in her book illustrations, carefully coordinated them with her narratives and
题目分析：用them指代illustration，但是前面没有直接说illustration而是用in her illustrations，表达的意思是在一个地方，这个them没有指代的东西，不合适。B也是这个道理，干掉。C没犯这个错误，留着。D前面说coordinated with her narratives，后面应该说illustration开头才能与此对应，但是后面跟了个人名，不合适，干掉。E又用them，犯的错误与
