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When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
(A) When drafting the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, included in it by the author, Elizabeth Cady Stanton, was a call for female enfranchisement.
(B) Including a call for female enfranchisement, a draft of the Declaration of Sentiments was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848 that Elizabeth Cady Stanton wrote.
(C) When the Declaration of Sentiments drafted by Elizabeth Cady Stanton was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Convention in 1848, a call for female enfranchisement had been included in it.
(D) A call for female enfranchisement, included in Elizabeth Cady Stanton's draft of the Declaration of Sentiments in 1848, that was adopted by the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention.
When Elizabeth Cady Stanton drafted the Declaration of Sentiments that was adopted at the Seneca Falls Women's Rights Convention in 1848, she included in it a call for female enfranchisement.
原文大致意思：当起草一个宣言的时候，宣言的作者呼吁female enfranchisement
题目分析：A显然不对，因为当我读到when drafting的时候我希望后面马上说是谁做出draft这个动作，而后面说的是included in it，显然与前面无法对应，杀！B上来说including，后面马上说draft，还是比较对应，先留着 C从头到位全用被动，意思倒是没有错，读起来就是很别扭，杀。D没谓语，如果我们把include当成谓语的话，include前面应该加一个be动词，否则意思不对，应该是a call被包含在一个宣言里而不是a call 包含宣言，E当一个家伙起草一个宣言，后面马上说she，前后还是挺对应的，留着。B和E进行比较，一个被动，一个主动，读起来显然主动意思更舒服，选E。有人会发现，这道题目我没有强调选项对比，因为这几个选项实在不太像，没有可比性，我只能根据句子前后逻辑关系直接读出这个选项好还是不好！
